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Fantasy: Critical Compensation For Giving Away Opportunities

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Su’en is the most senior disciple of the Dao Sect in the Heavenly Domain, despite being of average talent. However, he stumbled upon a Critical Compensation system: Whenever he gave up his opportunities to others, he would obtain Critical Compensations, multiplying his gains and rewards. [Congratulations on giving up a Foundation Establishment Pill. You have unlocked a hundredfold Critical Compensation. You have gained 100 Foundation Establishment Pills!] [Congratulations on giving up a Xuan Rank technique. You have unlocked a thousandfold Critical Compensation. You have gained a Heaven Rank technique!] [Congratulations on giving up the egg of a Nine-tailed Owl. You have unlocked a Critical Compensation. You have gained the egg of the divine beast: the Vermillion Bird!] … Su’en’s junior Ye Lingyun declared, ”Senior, you have done so much for you. In order to repay you, I must marry you!” The other disciples of the sect announced, “We, the younger generation of the Dao Sect, will bow to no one but Senior Su!” The Empress of the Sky Demon Sect demanded, ”You gifted me the Emperor Rhyme Purple Gold Lotus, the only one of its kind in the world. And you claim I am nothing to you?” Su’en looked at the two divine maidens—one good, one evil, both beholden to him in devotion. He said, “Maybe I am selfish after all.”
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