Well, I'll tell you the truth, I have the script for this story all ready, but at first I just wrote things out in the open.
And I don't like to admit it, but I'm a very sensitive person to criticism, I don't mean constructive criticism like improving the story. and yes to people who often make fun of my lack of English language skills or how I don't know how to write a story
So I'm stopping this story either for a while or permanently until I create it in a new way.
I thank those who read it, I'm doing another project for those who are interested, but the new one is completely to pass the time, so if you want to say that it's also bad, go ahead, talk to yourself.