Certainly! Here's a fully refined, immersive, and cinematic version of the scene you described—with natural dialogue, vivid surroundings, and a grounded tone for Haruto's god-like evolution. The test of his Kyomu and Eye of Causality abilities are shown as personal and quiet, as you requested—no one is watching him.
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Haruto's Awakening – The Six Paths Unfold
The room was dim and silent, the only sound the soft flicker of a candle dancing beside the cracked mirror. Shadows painted themselves against the walls in uneven strokes as Haruto leaned in toward his reflection. His Rinnegan shimmered like a pool of galaxies—but now, six tomoe rotated lazily within the concentric rings.
A slow breath left his lips.
"...Six Paths Rinnegan," he murmured, like tasting the words for the first time.
A low, gravelly voice stirred inside his mind.
> "No… it can't be…"
It was Kurama—his tone no longer arrogant or cold, but shaken, as though the beast had just seen a ghost.
> "You have the Sage's eyes," the Nine-Tails whispered.
"This… this power… it's the Rinnegan of Hagoromo Ōtsutsuki himself. You're—"
Haruto raised both hands quickly, cutting him off with a half-laugh.
"Whoa, whoa. I'm not the reincarnation of some ancient monk, alright?" He glanced back at the mirror, brows raised. "If I was, I'd have god-tier chakra control. I still need to breathe when molding it, and I still trip over my own shadow clones sometimes."
Kurama stayed silent for a moment—long enough for the flickering candle to spit embers into the dark.
> "But… the eyes… how did they come to you? Did that Uchiha's Sharingan—Tobi's—merge with yours?"
Haruto's eyes narrowed. He tried to recall the moment, but it was all fog—just the memory of energy surging through him and the image of those eerie, glowing eyes.
"I don't know," he said honestly. "It felt like…Nothing literally the same I was before but..."
He turned from the mirror, eyes gleaming faintly in the dark.
"Either way, Kurama," he whispered, smiling to himself, "I've got something insane now. The Eye of Causality. With this, I don't dodge attacks anymore… I erase the reason they ever happened."
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The Next Morning – Kyomu Realm
The world here was endless and pale—like walking on the edge of a dream.
Clouds of violet mist drifted lazily across a blank white sky, and in the silence of the Kyomu Realm, Haruto stood alone. The terrain beneath his feet was a liquid blur—neither solid nor gas, a perfect mirror of unreality.
He cracked his knuckles and stretched.
"All right," he said to no one, the echo of his voice swallowed by infinity. "Let's test the upgrades."
A thought later, he focused on the border between realms—and in the blink of an eye, he phased into the real world.
He reappeared near a quiet forest clearing, the breeze brushing his hair. Sunlight filtered gently through the canopy. He stepped toward a tall cedar tree—
—and his foot passed through it.
The bark rippled like water, his body phasing completely into the tree's trunk without resistance. Not a scratch. Not a shift in chakra.
Haruto grinned, eyes gleaming with electric thrill.
"Kyomu now covers my entire body… not just parts. I'm untouchable. Nothing can land a hit unless I want it to."
He pulled back into reality and clenched his fists. No chakra surge. No exhaustion. It was seamless.
He turned his gaze to a nearby boulder. With a flick of his fingers, a kunai zipped through the air toward him, cutting wind—
—but just before it made contact, his eyes pulsed. The Rinnegan rotated. Time didn't stop, but reality itself twitched.
The kunai vanished mid-flight.
Haruto didn't blink. He turned and walked past the tree. Behind him, the kunai reappeared mid-air—embedded in the trunk, as if it had always been thrown in the wrong direction.
> "I didn't block it. I rewrote its cause…" he whispered. "I made it so the kunai was thrown wrong in the first place. That's… terrifying."
He raised his hand again, concentrating.
"Let's try forcing a cause…"
He looked at a small bush nearby, and imagined that it had already been burned. His Rinnegan spun once more, and with a sudden hiss, steam rose from the leaves—the entire shrub wilting and smoking from an invisible fire that no one had seen lit.
Haruto stepped back, exhaling sharply.
"That one… drained a lot," he muttered. "I can't use this recklessly."
But still… he smiled. Eyes glowing. Chest thudding.
He stared up at the clouds, his voice low.
"it is fucking amazing!"
"then comes partial domain" haruto said eyes glinting like sparks as the whole environment turned blackish
Haruto stared at the rabbit near the tree as it was moving slow
Like time itself had slowed down
Just as haruto deactivated partial domain the rabbit stopped and looked around
"So he realized something was wrong?"
"Did it only effect their speed?"
Haruto thought as he shrugged
"Now...eye of construction" haruto said as he focused on the burnt bush
Instantly the bush flared to life again as haruto watching this immediately went closer to inspect
"This...this is more healthier then before!" Haruto exclaimed shocked with his new abilities
"So let me get this straight, I have four unique abilties"
"Kyomu, which now makes my body intangible"
"Eye of casualty, that can simply rewrite fate itself"
"Eye of Construction, Heals or make any object into its peak form"
"Partial domain, Slows down people in my experience..." Haruto thought a bit as he shrugged
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Authors corner
Thinking of giving a time skip now and go straight to Shippuden
See ya guys on Shippuden thanks for being with me on Naruto classic this whole time
Peace~~