Hey everyone, thanks so much for reading Modern Day Martial Arts.
After going through your feedback and rereading the early chapters myself, I realized there were things I could improve to help the story flow better and set the foundation more clearly for what's coming in Chapter 6 and beyond.
So I've gone back and revised Chapters 1–5. made slight changes to the system in chapter 6 as well. These changes focus on tightening up Blue's journey, clarifying the worldbuilding, and making sure key emotional beats land the way they're supposed to.
If you've already read the original versions, I still recommend checking these new ones out...you'll catch new details, smoother transitions, and a few early seeds for major events to come.
Thanks again for all the support. Big things are on the horizon.
Let's get stronger together.
-TheeRaven