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The Undying Order

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Damon Graves' life changed the day he was murdered in a school fight. But death wasn’t the end — it was just the beginning. He wakes to discover a truth that shatters everything he thought he knew: he belongs to an ancient, hidden order of immortals — beings who die and return, carrying secrets etched deep in their blood. But with this gift comes a curse. Hunted by a powerful enemy sworn to erase their kind from existence, Damon is thrust into a dangerous world he never asked for. And while he's still trying to understand what he is, he finds himself pursued by humans obsessed with using him as an experiment — to unlock the key to eternal life. Now, with his mother taken by the enemies of the Order, Damon must search for the rest of his kind, uncover the truth of his bloodline, and fight to survive in a war that has raged in the shadows for centuries. First, he must find them. Then… he must become one of them.
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Chapter 1 - Damon Graves

The morning light slanted through the tall windows of Bellgrave Academy, casting golden lines across the tiled floor. Damon moved quietly through the hallway, the buzz of chatter and footsteps surrounding him like the murmur of an invisible current. His shoulders were relaxed, his pace unhurried, and yet eyes followed him as if he carried a storm in his wake.

He stood out—not because he tried to, but because he couldn't help it.

Tall, leanly built, with a quiet kind of presence that drew more attention than if he'd shouted for it. His hair, dark and unkempt in an effortlessly deliberate way, fell just above his brows, sometimes dipping into his eyes. And those eyes—deep, soft, almost unreadable—seemed to hold more than his eighteen years. He didn't wear anything flashy. Just the school uniform, the tie a little loose, the sleeves rolled to his elbows. There was something restrained in him, like the calm just before something snaps. Something people noticed without knowing exactly why.

As he passed, girls whispered and giggled behind their hands, eyes following the way he moved.

"That's him?" one girl whispered.

"Yeah," another answered, "That's Damon."

There was awe in their voices. Not the usual crush-fueled whispering teenage girls were known for—but something a little heavier, more real.

The boys, too—most of them a year or two older—nodded at him. Some gave small, respectful smiles. Others just stared, sizing him up, reassessing everything they thought they knew about him.

He returned none of it. No smirk. No raised brow. Just that same quiet walk.

Damon hadn't been a name people paid much attention to. He was that quiet kid in the back of the room, the one who didn't speak unless spoken to, who carried his books without fanfare and disappeared between classes like a shadow slipping through sunlight. No one had expected him to even enter the academy's annual karate tournament. And certainly, no one had expected him to win.

Especially not against Sean Donovan.

Sean was a beast in the ring. Broad, thick-necked, with a confidence that bordered on arrogance. He had won the last three tournaments in a row, each victory more brutal than the last. His name was known not just across Bellgrave, but throughout the district. He'd represented the academy in inter-school competitions and brought home gold every time. People talked about him like he was already a champion in the making, like the rest of them were just lucky to breathe the same air.

And yet, in yesterday's final match, the impossible had happened.

Damon had stepped into the ring looking exactly like what he was—tall but skinny, calm to the point of indifference. His arms, pale and wiry, looked like they belonged to a violinist, not a fighter. There had been laughter in the crowd before the match. Quiet scoffs. Betting slips exchanged under breath.

Then the bell rang.

And in less than five minutes, Damon had dismantled Sean.

Not with luck. Not with one cheap shot or a lucky hit.

With speed and precision.

And with strength—real, shocking strength—that exploded out of those "tiny arms" like coiled steel. Every move was controlled. Calculated. Perfect. Sean had barely landed a blow. He left the mat dazed, bruised, and for the first time—afraid.

No one could understand it. Not the coaches. Not the students. Not even Sean himself.

But they all saw it.

And now, as Damon walked through the hallway, the memory of that flawless victory lingered in every glance thrown his way.

He hadn't smiled. He hadn't celebrated. He had just bowed quietly, accepted the trophy, and left before the applause had even died down.

Whatever people thought of him before, they thought something very different now.

He looked lean. Fragile, even.

But there was strength in those arms. And yesterday, Damon Graves had made sure the whole school would never forget it.

The classroom was already half-full by the time Damon pushed the door open.

Heads turned.

Some pretended not to notice him. Others made no attempt to hide it. A couple of boys near the front nudged each other, whispering behind their hands. One girl, seated by the window, immediately straightened in her chair, tucking a stray strand of hair behind her ear and casually glancing his way—twice. He said nothing. Didn't pause. Just walked in like he was made of fog and silence, and quietly took his seat at the back of the room.

Always the back.

Not because he was hiding, but because it gave him the space to think. To observe. To breathe without feeling like someone was watching him—though lately, that was a luxury he no longer had.

His desk was the same as always. Scarred wood. Wobbly leg. A little sticker someone had tried and failed to peel off in the corner. He placed his bag down, leaned back in his chair, and stared ahead at the empty board. Class hadn't started yet, but the buzz of conversation around him filled the room like static.

Damon didn't speak. He didn't need to. The classroom did the talking for him.

"I heard Sean had to go to the nurse afterward," someone muttered.

"How'd he do it though? Like—he's not even bulky."

"Maybe he trained in secret or something."

"Bet he has a personal trainer. Or a sensei or whatever they're called."

Damon didn't flinch. He'd learned a long time ago how to filter noise. He kept his face still, his gaze focused on nothing in particular. But he could feel the looks. Girls, especially. Quick glances over their shoulders. Giggled whispers muffled behind palms. He knew what they were thinking—some mix of curiosity and interest, like he had suddenly shifted from "invisible boy" to "mysterious champion."

Still, he didn't acknowledge them.

The truth wasn't something he wanted to share. And it certainly wasn't anything glamorous.

It wasn't some secret dojo. There were no black-belt uncles or shadowy mentors guiding him under moonlight.

It was his mother.

She had been the one.

He could still hear her voice in his head—the sharp clap of her hands, the bark of instructions, the warmth of her laughter when he finally got something right.

"Balance is everything, Damon. You don't need bulk to win. Just timing. Just control."

She'd taught him in their narrow backyard, between the rusted clothesline and the row of wilting potted plants. She never wore a gi, just old sweatpants and a faded hoodie. But the way she moved—fast, precise, powerful—there was no mistaking it. She was the real deal.

A champion, she'd told him once. Back in her day.

He hadn't believed her at first. She never talked about her past unless he pushed. But one day, when he was about eleven, she'd taken down three boys who tried to mug her outside the corner store. He had watched her do it—cool as ice, not a single wasted move. She had walked away like it was nothing.

That was the day he stopped doubting her. The day he started listening.

They had trained for years, mostly in secret. She said it was for discipline, for focus, for protection. Damon never questioned why she insisted. He just listened, practiced, and absorbed every lesson.

She was all he had. His only family.

His father… well, there wasn't much to say.

His mother never spoke about him beyond the basics. He was "gone," she'd said. "Dead," in her quiet, final tone—the kind of tone that didn't invite questions. Damon had asked once, maybe twice, when he was younger. She had looked at him with eyes full of something close to grief but edged with steel. After that, he stopped asking.

No photos. No keepsakes. No stories by the fire.

Just her. Just them.

It had always been that way.

Their house was small, tucked behind a row of sagging fences and cracked sidewalks. But it was warm. Safe. His mother was strict, sometimes distant, but she never let him feel unloved. She worked hard—two jobs, some nights—and still found time to make dinner and check his homework and spar with him until their shadows stretched long in the dusk.

He owed everything to her.

And yesterday, in that ring—when he stood alone, faced with the fury and force of Sean Donovan—he hadn't thought of glory, or proving anything to anyone.

He had only thought of her.

The woman who taught him how to move.

How to breathe through fear.

How to stand his ground when everything inside him wanted to run.

He didn't fight for admiration.

He fought because it was all he'd ever known.

And it had always been the two of them.

Just him.

And his mother.