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THE SYSTEM'S RECKONING

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Synopsis
Elliot's in-laws curse the day their daughter married Elliot Vance who became jobless and couldn't cater for his family. He was abused and belittled by his in-laws and his wife who ended up cheating on him with her boss who was richer. Eliot couldn't take it, he tried to get his wife back but she gave him the divorce paper as Eliot was thrown out of his matrimonial home left on the road side, depressed and everything already taken from him then (A SYSTEM ACTIVATE) (HOST CONNECTED) Eliot is given the power to get his revenge as he tried to upgrade to avoid any evil thing to befall him.
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Chapter 1 - CHAPTER 1

The Breaking Point

Eliot's world had been shrinking, a tight knot of despair, ever since he lost his job. Before, his days were full of purpose – meeting deadlines, pleasing clients, feeling good about his work. Now, the silence of their small apartment was a constant reminder of his unemployment, his growing worthlessness. He'd tried, truly. All those job applications, the polite rejections, the interviews that led nowhere – they felt like tiny hammers, slowly, steadily, chipping away at the man he used to be.

Sarah, his wife, had once been his rock. Her laugh could calm his worst worries. Her touch offered comfort. But that laughter was gone, replaced by a cold quiet. Her touch, a distant memory. The gap between them started as a tiny crack, almost invisible. Now, it was a wide, deep hole, made bigger each day by the constant, cruel words of her parents.

"Still no work, Eliot?" his mother-in-law, Carol, would ask with a fake smile, her eyes sharp, judging him at Sunday dinner. "It's such a shame. Sarah works so hard, doesn't she, dear? It must be… tiring."

His father-in-law, Robert, a man who seemed to ooze wealth, would just grunt. That sound said more than any words, full of pure disgust. "A man has to provide, Eliot. It's how things are supposed to be."

Eliot would force a weak, shaky smile and mumble something about the job market, about still applying. But inside, each word from them felt like a splinter, digging deeper, poisoning him. He saw the change in Sarah's eyes. She'd pull away when he reached for her hand. She started coming home late from work more often. Her once supportive looks turned into clear disappointment, then outright scorn.

He tried to talk to her, to close the growing distance. "Sarah, we need to talk. About us. About everything."

She'd just sigh, a dramatic, tired sound that said it all. "What's there to talk about, Eliot? We're struggling. You're… struggling. I have to carry all the burden." She'd turn her back to him, a solid wall he couldn't get past.

The last few weeks were a hazy, numb existence. Their apartment, once a safe place, became a prison. Every corner held a memory of a shared laugh, a whispered secret, now twisted into a sharp stab of pain. He saw Sarah less and less. Her excuses grew weaker, her eyes avoided his. Deep down, he knew something was terribly wrong. But he clung to the desperate hope that it was just the stress, the money problems, her family's pressure. He clung to the ghost of the woman he married.

Then came the end. Not with a bang, but with a sickening, silent snap.

He woke up early, which was unusual, his mind clearer than the usual fog of depression. Sarah hadn't come home. Again. A cold dread crept through him. He called her phone; it went straight to voicemail. He called her office; no answer. A knot of ice tightened in his stomach. He tried Richard's number, her rich, charming boss, telling himself it was just a hunch, a worry for her safety. The phone rang once, twice… then a click. And a voice. Richard's voice, thick with sleep and something else Eliot couldn't quite name.

"Yeah?"

Eliot's breath caught. "Richard? Is Sarah there? She didn't come home, and I'm worried."

A pause. A rustle. Then, Sarah's voice, muffled, sleepy. "Who is it, honey?"

The call ended.

Eliot stood there, the phone slipping from his numb fingers, clattering to the floor. The world spun. Honey. The word echoed in the sudden, empty silence of the apartment, a final, crushing blow. It wasn't just a guess anymore. It was raw, undeniable truth. The shocking discovery hit him like a punch, knocking the air from his lungs, leaving him empty of everything but a cold, burning void.

He didn't move for what felt like forever. The apartment, once a prison, now felt like a tomb. When Sarah finally walked through the door hours later, her eyes wide with a practiced innocence that vanished the moment she saw him, the air in the room grew heavy, suffocating. She held a crisp white envelope, its contents clear even before she spoke.

"Eliot," she began, her voice flat, emotionless, like a stranger's. "I… I think it's time."

The divorce papers, cold and official, floated onto his lap. He barely noticed them. All he could see was Richard's face, Sarah's sleepy murmur, the betrayal carved into every inch of his crumbling world.

"Get out," she said, her voice turning harder, sharper. "Just… get out."

He didn't fight her. He couldn't. He walked out of the apartment, out of his marriage, out of his life. He found himself on the roadside, the setting sun casting long, mocking shadows. The few things he'd managed to grab in a daze – a worn backpack, a coat – felt ridiculously small. He was nothing. An empty shell. A ghost.

The streetlights flickered on, painting the familiar world in a strange, harsh glow. He sat on the curb, the concrete cold beneath him, staring at the last bits of his life fading away. The dark, tempting thought whispered in his mind: This is it. The end.

As he closed his eyes, ready to give up, a sudden, almost painful burst of energy swept over him. It was more than a feeling; it was a pure force, electrifying every part of him. His eyes shot open, but the world around him seemed to twist, to shimmer. And then, right in front of him, visible only to him, a mysterious message flashed, burning itself into his sight:

(A SYSTEM ACTIVATE)

(HOST CONNECTED)

The words hung in the air, a stark, digital announcement against the backdrop of his broken reality. His old life was over. And from its ashes, something new, terrifying, and utterly unknown had just begun.