"This is the world of immortal / cultivation where strong people rule and fight for absolute power and weak people
can only be prey".
"At the beginning of the story, a black hair cloth standing
on a mountain peak and says "
"The time has came they are coming back after million year
if they regain power they can shack the unverise and destory
all thing ".
"But the thing are gretting interesting beacuse a young star
is born can this star stop the calamity let see"."After the black
hair disappear from the mountain peak".
ZHOU EMPIRE
YUN CLAN HOUSE
"In fighting ground two young figure standing opposite
one of the boy "." yun feng finally i can fight you now i want to show eveyone i yun lang is the strongest in yun family ".
"Yun feng says i really appericate your fighting will ok let start the battle "."Yun lang summon a sword run toward yun feng
and wave slash toward "
"The crowd also cheering the battle one of the boy from crowd
says yun lang awaken there origin power and break to four star origin qi level and yun feng whp did even not awake the origin levels how can he beat yun lang ".
"Other boy from the crowd says you did't understand yun feng is born genuis without even awake he can origin level he can summon a element "
"The crowd shock what without even awake he can summon a element "."When the crowd whispering the battle between
yun feng and yun lang ".
"Yun feng summon a bright red flame in his hand and wave a alash attack toward yun lang
"When the yun lang saw the attack he says a element without wasting time he make a barrier from the sword to protect himself".
"But the the fire attack break the barrier and hit yun lang beacuse of this yun lang fallen from the figthing ground ".
"The crowd became slient one hit yun feng defeat yun lang in one hit serious yun feng is genuis "
"The crowd is shouting yun feng name "
"yun feng walk toward yun lang and gave him a helping hand and says yun lang you are genuis in your yun family aslo four star origin qi level at the age of eleven ",
"Yun lang simle and grab the hand and stand up and say to brother feng you do't let a lie you can awaken a element without origin level awakeing "
" you are simpliy a monster among genuis " yun feng simle and break the handlock between them and sy good bye and start walking toward yun clan house ".
"yun feng enter yun household many guard greet him and yun feng aslo pass a sweat simle and enetr his room and sit down in a chair "
"Monster among genuis but sunddenly a system appear in front yun feng face "
DING DING
[ you have complete your mission]
[mission defeat yun lang a genuis of yun family]
[reward system clean your all toixic nature qi in your body so host can awake origin qi level smoothly]
[next mission = awake your origin qi ]
"after the screen disappear "
"yun feng take a breath and says back then when my mother is pregnant a powerful enemy attack father father try save some but mother got posion "
"And because of that my father say i can't cultivate in my entire life so they send me to yun house create by mother and father "
"after that whole nine year pass but mother and father did't come back the last thing they let me is that they going bring formula so they can slove the element problem in my body ".
" Back then i did't understand why they say about element problem because the main problem is the posion even now i can,t understand the reson bhind it".
"But when i was 6 year old practicing sword arts in back mountain a origin level beast attack "
" back then i fight him with my sword skill but beacuse a vpice rang in my ear
did you want to became strong ?
yes or no
"I flowting screen appear in the sky fist i was sacred i thing this my end "
" but because the beast attack a fire blast on me i click yes "
"And suddenly a strange fire appear in my front and attck the beast and burn him alive ".
" after i saw how the beast burn alive i was afriad but the fire didn't any thing and enter between my forehead "
"After that flowting screen appear "
IMMORTAL SYSTEM ACTIVE