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The Abandoned Dark Prodigy

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Kaelen, a disgraced mage exiled after a tragic magical accident, as he disappears into the wastelands and returns years later reborn as a mysterious figure known as “The Seeker.” Offering hope and power to the forsaken, Kaelen amasses a devoted following, challenging the old order and reshaping kingdoms. Told through journal entries, witness accounts, and Kaelen’s own voice, the novel paints a picture of redemption—until disturbing truths begin to surface.
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Chapter 1 - Chapter 1: Ash and Gold

They always said the Academy was where greatness began , where the blessed and

the brilliant were shaped into the pillars of the realm. Its towers, pale as bone, reached

so high they seemed to scrape the stars, and its courtyards bloomed with flowers

enchanted to never wilt. Songs were sung of its splendor. Children dreamed of walking

its halls. Parents wept with pride the day their offspring crossed its threshold. But not

Kaelen's parents. He had none to see him off, no hands to wave goodbye, no warm

embrace promising he'd be missed. Only the cold hush of the orphanage matron's

disinterest as she signed his name away.

Kaelen remembered his first steps through the wrought-iron gates , how the air itself felt

different, almost charged, as if every stone in that place breathed magic. He'd clutched

his satchel tight, the contents pitiful: one spare tunic, a spellbook already secondhand

and annotated in someone else's scrawl, and a folded parchment that named him one

of the "Accepted." It should have felt like a dream. But from the beginning, Kaelen

noticed things the others didn't , the sideways glances when he spoke, the small, quiet

way instructors passed over his raised hand. He thought it was nerves at first, or some

fault of his voice. But weeks turned into months, and the cold remained. He was always

the last picked for spell duels, the last invited to study groups, the one who never quite

belonged.

The instructors praised precision. They demanded elegance. And Kaelen's magic was

neither. It fought him , strange, slow to answer, often misfiring or producing effects not

written in any of the sanctioned tomes. A simple levitation spell would make objects float

upside-down or twist into unfamiliar shapes. An attempt at a fire rune once produced a

sickly green flame that hissed in pain. The others laughed. Sometimes, they recoiled.

By his third year, he was known more for his failures than his efforts. Rumors spread

that he carried a curse , or worse, that he was drawing from forbidden wells. Of course,

no one said this to his face. They simply stopped speaking to him at all.

But Kaelen endured. He studied when others partied. He reread every text until the

pages blurred in his vision. He practiced alone, bleeding his fingers raw in the

frost-bitten training yards because the indoor chambers were "too full." He convinced

himself that hard work would win respect. That if he just proved himself, if he could

finally get one spell right , not just right, but perfect , then they would see him. Truly see

him.

And then came the Trials.

Every Academy student underwent them. Ritualized tests of arcane skill, discipline, and

potential. The first was the Trial of Binding , a test of elemental connection and magical

control. Kaelen failed twice. On the third attempt, he succeeded, barely, binding a wind

spirit that bucked and shrieked so violently it shattered the glass dome above the arena.

It left him winded, but the evaluators passed him with curt nods. He hadn't won their

awe, only their tolerance. But even tolerance, in that place, felt like gold.

The second trial, the Ritual of Ascendance, was different. It required the student to

channel energy through their own sigil, a unique magical mark designed by the caster. It

was a culmination , a public declaration of one's identity as a mage. Most designed

sigils are shaped from family heritage, regional glyphs, or traditional elements. Kaelen,

with no bloodline to draw from, crafted his from instinct. His dreams had shown him

fragments , spirals etched in bone, lines twisting into a shape that made little sense in

the waking world. He memorized it. It felt right.

When the day came, Kaelen stood in the ritual chamber, his sigil glowing faintly at his

feet. He felt calm. For the first time in years, he believed this would be the moment that

changed everything.

And it was.

But not the way he hoped.

The ritual chamber was a circular room of polished obsidian, set deep within the earth

beneath the Academy. Its black walls shimmered with the faint glow of containment

runes, humming softly with latent power. Torches lined the perimeter, casting long

shadows that seemed to lean inward, as if eager to witness what would unfold. High

above, instructors and students watched from a viewing gallery, their murmurs muffled

behind enchanted glass.

Kaelen stood at the center, the sigil he had drawn glowing faintly beneath his feet , a

curling, complex shape unlike any in the Academy's sanctioned glyphbooks. It pulsed a

dull silver, its lines breathing in rhythm with his heartbeat. The Master Examiner gave

the nod to proceed. Kaelen closed his eyes, took a slow breath, and began the

incantation.

At first, all was quiet. The energy rose like it should , slowly, carefully. He could feel the

leyline threading through him, tugging at the base of his spine, coiling into his hands.

For a moment, he smiled. This was working. This was right.

Then, something shifted.

The sigil brightened , too fast, too intensely. The dull silver flared into white-hot light.

The lines pulsed, then twisted, rearranging themselves with a mind of their own.

Kaelen's breath caught in his throat. He tried to pull back, to stop the flow, but the magic

surged, no longer obeying his will. It flooded through him, deeper and darker than

anything he had ever touched.

He heard screaming. At first, he thought it was his own. But then came a terrible,

cracking noise , like bones shattering under pressure , followed by shrill, agonizing

wails. The air thickened, hot and stinking of copper. Kaelen's eyes snapped open just in

time to see the first student collapse in the gallery above, his body withering like

parchment touched by flame. Another followed, then another , their forms shriveling as

though life itself was being siphoned from their veins.

The sigil beneath Kaelen burned like a brand, molten and alive. Tendrils of energy

writhed from it like vines, searching, grasping , hungry. He tried to scream for help, but

the words disintegrated on his tongue. The Master Examiner was shouting, casting

warding spells, calling for containment. The lights overhead exploded in a cascade of

sparks. Glass cracked. The containment runes on the walls flickered , not failing, but

recoiling, as if rejecting what had entered the chamber.

Then, as abruptly as it had begun, it stopped.

The light winked out. The sigil was gone, scorched into the floor. Smoke clung to

Kaelen's clothes, and his knees buckled. He fell forward, catching himself on trembling

hands. All around him, silence reigned , broken only by the distant sobbing of one of the

instructors in the gallery above.

Three students were dead.

One instructor, unconscious, his mind shattered from exposure to the raw magic.

And Kaelen, at the center of it all, blinking through the haze, could only whisper, "I didn't

mean to…"

But no one listened.

Security mages seized him before he could even rise. He didn't fight. His thoughts were

still catching up, looping over what had happened , over what shouldn't have happened.

He was taken to a sealed infirmary chamber, but no one came to treat him. For two

days, he waited in silence, watching through reinforced crystal.

On the third day, the Headmaster arrived. He did not sit. He did not speak at first. He

simply studied Kaelen with a gaze devoid of warmth. When he finally spoke, his words

were brief and hollow.

"There will be no trial. There will be no appeal. You are to leave Halemir. Now."

Kaelen opened his mouth to protest , to explain, to beg , but something in the

Headmaster's eyes told him the words would never matter. Not here. Not anymore.

He was escorted from the grounds before dawn, stripped of his robes and sigil ring, his

name erased from the student registry as if he had never existed. The gates of Halemir

closed behind him with a thunderous finality. No one looked back. Not one.

He was sixteen.

The road beyond Halemir was not made for the cast-out.

Kaelen wandered with blistered feet and hollow lungs, clutching the thin cloak they'd

allowed him to keep. The forests were still in the early days of frost, the leaves brittle

with morning ice, and the sun seemed to rise less for him now , pale, indifferent, hidden

behind gray clouds. Hunger gnawed at him, but no village would take him in. The name

Kaelen had already spread, whispered from frightened mouths and trembling lips: The

boy who killed three with a glance. The one with cursed blood. A vessel for something

not of this world.

He slept in root hollows and ruined chapels. When he passed through old waystations

or crumbling watchposts, travelers moved away from him. Children cried when they saw

his face. No one asked what had really happened. No one offered food or fire. They

looked at him the same way the instructors had , with suspicion first, fear second. Pity

had long since vanished.

On the seventh day of exile, his legs finally gave out. He collapsed beside the broken

remains of a statue, some forgotten deity whose name time had stolen, and let the cold

embrace him. Snow had begun to fall in delicate spirals. It looked almost beautiful.

Kaelen thought, distantly, that this might be the end.

But the silence around him was not empty.

There was a pressure in the air, like the world had inhaled and forgotten to exhale. The

wind stilled. The snow stopped in mid-air. And then, softly, inside his mind, not spoken,

but felt, came a voice.

"They feared you because they did not understand you. They cast you out, not because

you were weak… but because you were becoming strong."

Kaelen's breath caught. The voice wasn't male or female, old or young. It was. It

resonated through the marrow of his bones, ancient and intimate. He didn't move.

Couldn't. His limbs had gone numb, but he was listening with something deeper than his

ears.

"You were shaped in their image, and now you are broken from it. This is not a curse.

This is freedom."

The broken statue beside him cracked. A single piece of stone fell away, revealing a

dark symbol carved beneath: sharp, spiraled lines that matched the sigil from the ritual.

His sigil. But… older. Primordial. As if he hadn't created it at all. As if it had always been

there, waiting for someone to remember it.

Something inside Kaelen shifted , not healed, not soothed, but aligned. The sorrow that

had crushed him for days twisted into resolve. The ache of betrayal became clarity. The

pain did not leave him, but it no longer owned him. He reached out with a trembling

hand, placed it against the exposed sigil on the statue, and felt a pulse , not unlike the

rush of leyline magic, but wilder, deeper. Older.

Power surged through him.

It didn't scream. It was welcomed.

The snow resumed falling. The wind returned. Kaelen stood slowly, stronger than he

had been in days. He looked to the north, toward the land beyond Halemir, ungoverned,

forgotten, wild. There were ruins there, and secrets older than any Academy. Magic the

elite had buried and feared. It was calling to him now, not to destroy, but to become.

They had cast him out thinking they were ending his story.

But Kaelen knew better now.

They hadn't ended it. They had freed it.

He would learn. He would grow. And one day, when the towers of Halemir no longer

looked so tall, and when their gates opened to beg for salvation, they would not find a

prodigal son.

They would find the consequence of their cowardice. And they would welcome him as a

savior… never realizing the monster they themselves had made.